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The light of life


You are one of a kind
You give me glee
Come back my light
Come back to me

You stayed with me
In times of need
Asking for you now
Is it greed?

I know not
If you feel the same
I know not
If you find it lame

You gave me comfort
You gave me the warmth
You showed the way
Whether you knew it or not

You stayed there
Whenever I needed assistance
You still do
Albeit at a distance

The little flame you were
A depiction of undying hope
Inspiration is what you gave
So I could always cope

Your absence has left
A space dark and empty
That cannot be filled
By any bounty

You are one of a kind
You give me glee
Come back my light
Come back to me

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Bala said…
Brilliant.. Just brilliant.. You have been extremely careful in choice of words.. There is a beautiful sync between the meaning and rhyming..

It does emote :)

Good work.. had to refer a dictionary though :) A special credit if you had done it without any reference..
8 December 2010 at 12:42 pm
Neon Red said…
Thanx Hari!
There's a little more than what meets the eye though... :)

N about the reference, I did refer a little to be sure of the meaning in a couple of cases; so I could probably take a portion of the special credits. :)
8 December 2010 at 4:26 pm
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