I promise not to speakI promise to stay quiet and listen
To every word pronounced
And stay a kitten.
I promise to help you
I promise to stay
I promise to wait
For more than a day.
Take your time
And take mine too
For the love we have
Very few do.
Take me to parties
Take me to your friends’
Smile I shall
From both ears’ ends.
Be the good one,
I will.
Less talk, sweet smile
Looks that can kill.
The brand manager
Of today’s man.
Thy spouse
Thy fan.
Speak as I will
Only on occasions that mandate
Speak as I will
Only on that particular date.
I promise to be by your side
In every endeavor.
That I abide.
But please, do me a favor.
Don’t ask me to speak
For I shall not.
Never after you told me not to
Never after we fought.
Comments
The last lines did hurt me a lil... But it's ok....
I loved you for your 29th and 30th lines most...
you seriously need to give some more time to poetry...
This piece was a real touching one. n I must say... gr8 going !!
It was an experience for me, especially the lines towards the end of the poem were too good to read, it takes me to a blissful state I must say..
I take back my words that I had given in my previous comment :-) your core competence is definitely writing poems and of course reviews..